My Story

As I mentioned before, I am a writer. I am writing a story about a girl that gets a guide dog puppy and I was wondering if y'all might want to read some of it? I could post a chapter. And you guys could give me some suggestions on some of the ideas. Like wether or not to keep them in the story, that sort of thing. I would not be offended by anything you say. So just give me some feedback! Thanks.